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My new animated series me and :icondevilcerberus:

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Nice job i for an animation maybe you should work on the running a bit to make it look like hes touching the ground a little bit more maybe some dirt come up when his foot hits the ground and slow it down a bit the running is a little to fast

backgrounds should be a tad more deep as in make look 3 dimensional for the characters to be in you can watch videos on 3d shapes to do that

characters i have no problems with the character animation they all look pretty good to me

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Critique by The-Brony-Cartoonist Nov 11, 2012, 9:23:21 PM
I love the trailer but what you could do when making sequences of you're characters running, you could make them run at different angles. Also consider making character sheets for each character that way you won't be stuck drawing the character in a strange sort of view (EX: Willows nose while shes running.) Although the finished product (As you told me on Skype) will take a long time to finish, i really can't wait until the finished animation is finally completed well done Sarah and Thrash, well done! Hope to hear from you soon!

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The-Brony-Cartoonist Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012
Do you use a converter for animations because i would like to release my shitty (i mean) really cool animations
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rouge2t7 Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Student Digital Artist
No, flash can convert it into an SWF by exporting it as a movie.
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The-Brony-Cartoonist Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012
Because i want to add sound so how can i do that?
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SnowandShadow Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012  Student Artist
I LOVE this trailer, and waiting to see more. ;3;
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VocaloidBRSFreak97 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012
Awesome! I'm looking forward to it
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tealsy99 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
this is...AMAZING HOW DID YOU MAKE THIS
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rouge2t7 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Flash 8
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tealsy99 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
ok thanks
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DrChrisman Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Petty good :)
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RonixTH Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Freaking amazing can't wait to see it
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